Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Updated- Oval Realm

I updated a little bit of The Oval Realm ,  just barely started chapter 2.  I think I added a couple paragraphs. So hows it coming along? I'd love to hear your thoughts. I know its a little choppy, and I desperately hope that with your help I can improve! Thanks<3
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  1. MaverickAugust 7, 2013 at 4:55 PM

    'The Oval Realm' is looking good! Nice details and Pao reminds me of one of my own characters, personality and occupation-wise. It would be really nice and easier to read if you wanted to separate the piece into sections similar to what you have done with 'The Hiders'. In any case, great storyline so far and I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Maverick (:

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  2. QuiAugust 8, 2013 at 8:06 AM

    :) Thanks for the advice!! I'll ask Halle to go through it later and make everything more organized! Im sort of a messy person, so sometimes my stories reflect that :P

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Your allowed to be rude.
Rudeness is nice.
Helps me.

But I also seriously enjoy nice comments.
So maybe you could do that.

If your correcting me on something<3 I love you. I love help. I need help.

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